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2021-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If i do business, i will open psychology counseling center Because, i want to help another people. I want to do counseling for mind sick people.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

The best option is always to make or sell a product or service that you know about and love. If you’re looking for someplace to score a short-term hit just for the sake of reaping a financial gain, that’s fine – get in; make your money; and get out. But if you’re looking to start a business for the long haul that suits your temperament, your strengths and the lifestyle you want, you must choose a business that you love.

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If i do business, i will open psychology counseling center

>> If I will open my own business, I will open a psychology counseling center because I want to help other people.

Because, i want to help another people.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

I want to do counseling for mind sick people.

>> I want to do counseling for people who have problems with their mental health.

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