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Q. Did you ever have trouble focusing in class when you were a kid?
I had a hard time concentrating in class because of my lack of concentration when I was kid. But I overcame this shortcoming through reading a book. Every time I read a book, my body stays in the same position. It makes me calm, so I concentrate my behavior. This action grows my concentration.
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Good morning [이름] Ji!
It\'s good to hear that you were able to overcome it.
I think that\'s one of the worst thing that parents try to handle.
Thank you for sharing!
I had a hard time concentrating in class because of my lack of concentration when I was kid.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: When I was young, I couldn\'t concentrate in class because of my lack of concentration.
But I overcame this shortcoming through reading a book.
>>> CORRECT!
Every time I read a book, my body stays in the same position.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: Every time I read a book, my body maintains the same posture.
It makes me calm, so I concentrate my behavior.
>>> It calms me down, so I focus on my actions.
This action grows my concentration.
>>> CORRECT!
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