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I usually stored old pictures in USB.
Sometimes I keep it in my computer.
If there is not enough hard drives, external hard drives can be connected and stored.
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Hi, [이름]!
These days, instead of using external hard drives, some people just expand their computers hard drives. Either ways, its good to have somewhere to store old pictures, right? ^^
~Elica~
I usually stored old pictures in USB.
>>I usually store old pictures on a USB.
Sometimes I keep it in my computer.
>>Sometimes, I keep them on my computer.
If there is not enough hard drives, external hard drives can be connected and stored.
>>If there isn\'t enough space in the computer\'s hard drive, external hard drives can be connected and used.
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