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2021-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If i make song, i make for me. Because i have little confidence Song through I want to do cheer myself.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

That\'s a great answer! This can really uplift your spirits. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

If i make song, i make for me.

>> If I am going to make a song, I will dedicate it to myself because I have little confidence.

Because i have little confidence

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

Song through I want to do cheer myself.

>> I want this song to cheer myself up.

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