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I like my birthstone.
My birthday is February 23rd.
So my birthstone is amethyst.
Amethyst is purple and very shiny, so it\'s very pretty.
I think the reason I like amethyst the most is because it\'s my birthstone.
But other birthstones seem to be very beautiful.
I think all the jewels seem pretty and beautiful.
And I\'d like to have a ring with my birthstone..haha
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I like my birthstone.
>>> CORRECT
My birthday is February 23rd.
>>> CORRECT
OR: My birthday is on February 23.
So my birthstone is amethyst.
>>> CORRECT
OR: My birthstone is amethyst.
Amethyst is purple and very shiny, so it\'s very pretty.
>>> Amethyst is purple and it\'s very shiny, so it\'s very pretty.
I think the reason I like amethyst the most is because it\'s my birthstone.
>>> I think the reason why I like amethyst the most is that it\'s my birthstone.
But other birthstones seem to be very beautiful.
>>> CORRECT
OR: But other birthstones seem to be very beautiful too.
I think all the jewels seem pretty and beautiful.
>>> I think all of the jewels/gems are pretty and beautiful.
And I\'d like to have a ring with my birthstone..haha
>>> I\'d like to have a ring with my birthstone on it.
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