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What is your dream place to visit? Why?
I would like to go to Dubai.
The world\'s tallest building, Burj Khalifa, is in Dubai.
I want to see the fountain show in front of the Burj Khalifa.
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Hi, [이름]!
Dubai is an interesting destination. The Burj Khalifa is just one of the views in Dubai. You can actually go sightseeing and play in the sand dunes as well. ^^ Thank you for sharing.
I would like to go to Dubai.
~Elica~
What is your dream place to visit? Why?
>>CORRECT
I would like to go to Dubai.
>>CORRECT
The world\'s tallest building, Burj Khalifa, is in Dubai.
The world\'s tallest building, Burj Khalifa, is in Dubai.
>>CORRECT
I want to see the fountain show in front of the Burj Khalifa.
I want to see the fountain show in front of the Burj Khalifa.
>>CORRECT
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