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I think people become beautiful depending on how they make up their minds.
A person who keeps doing bad thoughts and actions cannot be beautiful, and I think that if you think and act beautifully, you can become beautiful.
If you try hard like this, you will be able to become beautiful easily.
So I\'m trying to make my actions and thoughts beautiful in order to be beautiful.
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I think people become beautiful depending on how they make up their minds.
>>> I think people become beautiful depending on how they think.
A person who keeps doing bad thoughts and actions cannot be beautiful, and I think that if you think and act beautifully, you can become beautiful.
>>> A person who keeps on thinking of bad thoughts and bad actions cannot be beautiful. On contrary, if you think and act beautifully, you will become beautiful.
If you try hard like this, you will be able to become beautiful easily.
>>> If you try to think as hard as this then you\'ll be able to become beautiful inside and out.
So I\'m trying to make my actions and thoughts beautiful in order to be beautiful.
>>> CORRECT
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