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2021-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Korea covid-19 increase reason First, many people want covid-19 vaccine but, government don\'t have enough vaccine. Second, when covid-19 was decreaseing, government announced wrong policy. suddenly, regulation permited.

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Korea covid-19 increase reason

>> COVID-19 cases are increasing because of may reasons.

First, many people want covid-19 vaccine but, government don\'t have enough vaccine.

>> First, many people want to get the vaccine but the government doesn\'t have enough for everyone.

Second, when covid-19 was decreaseing, government announced wrong policy.

>> Second is that when the cases got higher, the government implemented wrong policies.

suddenly, regulation permited.

>> All of a sudden, regulations are already permitted.

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