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When do usually feel so uptight and in need of loosening up?
I get nervous when I try something new.
When I am nervous and my heart is beating , I take a deep breath or drink warm water.
When the loosen me up, my brain working well.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Focus and confidence is the key. It\'s okay to be nervous. It\'s good to feel nervous because it\'s part of the experience. Just feel the moment and claim the victory for a new experience. ^^
~Elica~
When do usually feel so uptight and in need of loosening up?
>>CORRECT
I get nervous when I try something new.
I get nervous when I try something new.
>>CORRECT
When I am nervous and my heart is beating , I take a deep breath or drink warm water.
When I am nervous and my heart is beating , I take a deep breath or drink warm water.
>>CORRECT
When the loosen me up, my brain working well.
When the loosen me up, my brain working well.
>>When I loosen up, my brain works well.
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