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2021-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I hate carrots. Because carrots feell like bitter. But sometimes carrots feel sweet. It feels very sweet when I eat carrot cake or carrot juice. I don\'t like raw carrots.😱 By the way Rabbits like carrot. I don\'t like carrots even if my teeth look like rabbit. And I actually don\'t have a lot of food I hate. Because I am a good kid.😁

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I hate carrots. Because carrots feell like bitter.

>> I hate carrots because carrots tastes bitter.
But sometimes carrots feel sweet. It feels very sweet when I eat carrot cake or carrot juice.

>> But sometimes carrots tastes sweet, it tastes very sweet when I eat carrot cake or drink carrot juice.

I don\'t like raw carrots. By the way Rabbits like carrot.

>> I don\'t like raw carrots the way Rabbits like carrots.
I don\'t like carrots even if my teeth look like rabbit.

>> I don\'t like carrots even if my teeth looks like a rabbit\'s teeth.
And I actually don\'t have a lot of food I hate. Because I am a good kid

>> I actually don\'t have a lot of food that I hate because I am a good kid.

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