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I endeavor sever of money. But, I like food eat.
I when want eat i buy food. so i spend money.
Sometimes, i spend money to buy food. so i don\'t have money.
Nowadays, i endeavor don\'t eat so saver of money.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Both are okay as long as you handle your expenses wisely. :)
I endeavor sever of money. But, I like food eat.
>> I endeavor saving saving money because I like to eat.
I when want eat i buy food. so i spend money.
>> When I want to buy a certain food, I spend money on it.
Sometimes, i spend money to buy food. so i don\'t have money.
>> Sometimes it\'s too much that\'s why I don\'t have any money anymore.
Nowadays, i endeavor don\'t eat so saver of money.
>> Nowadays, I don\'t eat too much so that I can save money.
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