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2021-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Yes, I thank my parents. I think the best and simplest way is to say thank you. When I express my thank and love to my parents, I make eye contact and talk or kiss them. And I answer questions with all my heart. And I always write what I was thankful for when I wrote a letter. And I try to say thank you a lot. Because I feel good when I heard thank you. Teacher Christina ! Thank you for being nice to me! Thank you so much !!🥰

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Yes, I thank my parents.

>> CORRECT!
I think the best and simplest way is to say thank you.

>> CORRECT!
When I express my thank and love to my parents, I make eye contact and talk or kiss them. And I answer questions with all my heart.

>> When I express my thanks and love to my parents, I make eye contact and talk or kiss them.

And I answer questions with all my heart.

>> I also answer questions with all my heart.
And I always write what I was thankful for when I wrote a letter.

>> I always write what I was thankful for when I wrote a letter.
And I try to say thank you a lot. Because I feel good when I heard thank you.

>> I try to say thank you a lot because I feel good when I hear \"thank you\".



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You\'re very much welcome [이름].^^ Likewise, I am very grateful that you are a very good student.

It is my privilege to be your teacher. Continue being a sweet and kind person. :) :) :)


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