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2021-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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Because time is very important in our life, If I have extra hours in a day, I would be very happy. And I will play golf in extra hours. Before I got merried I used to play golf after work. But after merriage, I had no time to play golf. And I get used not to play golf now.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^

I think these days you are busy~

I hope you will get to play golf again. ^^
Have a good weekend!

- T. Rina

1. Because time is very important in our life,
>> CORRECT!

2. If I have extra hours in a day, I would be very happy.
>> CORRECT!

3. And I will play golf in extra hours.
>> And I will play golf in those extra hours.

4. Before I got merried I used to play golf after work.
>> Before I got married, I used to play golf after work.

5. But after merriage, I had no time to play golf.
>> But after getting married, I had no time to play golf.

6. And I get used not to play golf now.

>> And these days, I got used to not playing golf.

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