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2021-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I take cold medicine and rest when I treat a cold. But I don\'t know how to treat a cold because I haven\'t caught a lot of colds. That\'s a good thing. Because it\'s not good to catch a cold a lot. Everyone, be careful not to catch a cold !!!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I take cold medicine and rest when I treat a cold.

>> When I treat a cold, I take medicine and I also take a rest.

But I don\'t know how to treat a cold because I haven\'t caught a lot of colds.

>> CORRECT!

 That\'s a good thing. Because it\'s not good to catch a cold a lot.

>> That\'s a good thing because it\'s not good to catch a cold a lot.
Everyone, be careful not to catch a cold !!!

>> Everyone, be careful not to catch a cold!!!

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