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2021-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If i make me own holiday, i will go to travel Because i love travel. I want to celebrate on travel me own holiday. Because, travel is my favorite. In travel if me own holiday celebrate i will happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Wow! That\'s a great choice! I think that would be a great holiday that you will enjoy.

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If i make me own holiday, i will go to travel

>> If I can make my own holiday, I will go traveling because I love to do that.

Because i love travel.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

I want to celebrate on travel me own holiday.

>> I want to celebrate by traveling on my holiday.

Because, travel is my favorite.
>> IT IS ALREADY REDUNDANT.

In travel if me own holiday celebrate i will happy.

>> I will be happy if I travel on this holiday.

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