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2012-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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John: Did you remember to bring that book I lent you? Paul: Oh, sorry, I forgot again. I will bring it tomorrow. I will buy my sister a book on gardening for her birthday. I don't feel like going out this evening. I'm going to stay at home and watch TV. Elizabeth: There's someone at the door. Mark: I will go and see who it is. I've decided that I'm looking for a new job I went to the cultural center in E-Mart on Saturday so that I register a class of the flute. I have been learning the flute for an year. But I'm not satisfied my playing. One of the reason, my breath is short and my finger is stiff. Most of all I don't have the musical sense. My playing is not getting better. I had not decided last Friday if I learn it continuously. I received the message that last Saturday is the last day of discount on tuition fee. I stopped the worry, I registered the class in the next day right now. I will just do it hard.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], happy Monday!!^^ Thank you once again for making your homework today.. Job well done on writing a composition Miss. [Name].. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam John: Did you remember to bring that book I lent you?Paul: Oh, sorry, I forgot again. I will bring it tomorrow. >>correct!I will buy my sister a book on gardening for her birthday. >>correct!I don\'t feel like going out this evening. I\'m going to stay at home and watch TV. >>correct!Elizabeth: There\'s someone at the door.Mark: I will go and see who it is. >>correct!I\'ve decided that I\'m looking for a new job >>correct!I went to the cultural center in E-Mart on Saturday so that I register a class of the flute. >>I went to the cultural center in E-mart to register in a flute class.I have been learning the flute for an year. >>I have been learning the flute for a year/ one year.But I\'m not satisfied my playing. >>But i\'m not satisifed with it.One of the reason, my breath is short and my finger is stiff. >>One of the reasons is, my breath is short and my fingers are stiff.Most of all I don\'t have the musical sense. >>correct!y playing is not getting better. >>My skill in playing thi instrument is not getting better.I received the message that last Saturday is the last day of discount on tuition fee. >>I reeived a message that last Saturday was the last day of having a discount on tuition fee.I stopped the worry, I registered the class in the next day right now. >>For me not to worry too much, I registered the class as soon as possible.I will just do it hard. >>correct!

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