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학생이 쓴 원문
John: Did you remember to bring that book I lent you?
Paul: Oh, sorry, I forgot again. I will bring it tomorrow.
I will buy my sister a book on gardening for her birthday.
I don't feel like going out this evening.
I'm going to stay at home and watch TV.
Elizabeth: There's someone at the door.
Mark: I will go and see who it is.
I've decided that I'm looking for a new job
I went to the cultural center in E-Mart on Saturday so that I register a class of the flute.
I have been learning the flute for an year.
But I'm not satisfied my playing.
One of the reason, my breath is short and my finger is stiff.
Most of all I don't have the musical sense.
My playing is not getting better.
I had not decided last Friday if I learn it continuously.
I received the message that last Saturday is the last day of discount on tuition fee.
I stopped the worry, I registered the class in the next day right now.
I will just do it hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], happy Monday!!^^
Thank you once again for making your homework today..
Job well done on writing a composition Miss. [Name]..
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam
John: Did you remember to bring that book I lent you?Paul: Oh, sorry, I forgot again. I will bring it tomorrow.
>>correct!I will buy my sister a book on gardening for her birthday.
>>correct!I don\'t feel like going out this evening. I\'m going to stay at home and watch TV.
>>correct!Elizabeth: There\'s someone at the door.Mark: I will go and see who it is.
>>correct!I\'ve decided that I\'m looking for a new job
>>correct!I went to the cultural center in E-Mart on Saturday so that I register a class of the flute.
>>I went to the cultural center in E-mart to register in a flute class.I have been learning the flute for an year.
>>I have been learning the flute for a year/ one year.But I\'m not satisfied my playing.
>>But i\'m not satisifed with it.One of the reason, my breath is short and my finger is stiff.
>>One of the reasons is, my breath is short and my fingers are stiff.Most of all I don\'t have the musical sense.
>>correct!y playing is not getting better.
>>My skill in playing thi instrument is not getting better.I received the message that last Saturday is the last day of discount on tuition fee.
>>I reeived a message that last Saturday was the last day of having a discount on tuition fee.I stopped the worry, I registered the class in the next day right now.
>>For me not to worry too much, I registered the class as soon as possible.I will just do it hard.
>>correct!
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