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2021-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think working in Korea is better because if I working in a different country, I don\'t no to where I go.

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Hi Jiyu! ^^

We have different reasons why we want to work in other countries. Some people prefer working in their home countries as well. Either way, it still depends on what suits you and your family depending on your needs as well. :) 

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I think working in Korea is better because if I working in a different country, I don\'t no to where I go.
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I think working in Korea is better because if I work in a different country, I don\'t where to go. 

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