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2021-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I\'m not sure what Hollywood movies are. But movies like Disney and Wonder Woman are Hollywood, right? Yes, I like those kinds of movies. But I also like Korean movies and comedy movies. I think movies make people really happy. I want to watch many movies with my family during this summer vacation.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I\'m not sure what Hollywood movies are.

>> CORRECT!
But movies like Disney and Wonder Woman are Hollywood, right?

>> Movies like Disney and Wonder Woman are Hollywood movies, right?
Yes, I like those kinds of movies.

>> Then yes, I like those kinds of movies.
But I also like Korean movies and comedy movies.

>> CORRECT!
I think movies make people really happy.

>> CORRECT!
I want to watch many movies with my family during this summer vacation.

>> I want to watch a lot of movies with my family during this summer vacation.

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