homework_1113
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you usually do with your friends?
I usually play game with my friends.
I play LOL and steam game. There are can play many people together.
I eat delicious food and drink with my friends outside.
I like drinking with someone.
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I usually play game with my friends.
>> I usually play games with my friends.
I play LOL and steam game. There are can play many people together.
>> I play LOL and Steam games. Many people can play together there.
I eat delicious food and drink with my friends outside.
CORRECT!
I play LOL and steam game. There are can play many people together.
>> I play LOL and Steam games. Many people can play together there.
I eat delicious food and drink with my friends outside.
CORRECT!
OR>> When I am outside with my friends, I love to indulge in delicious food and drinks.
I like drinking with someone.
CORRECT!
I like drinking with someone.
CORRECT!
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