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I want to travel abroad for vacation.
Because before corona 19, I went on a trip every vacation. But I am really sad because I can\'t travel abroad these days. Corona is really bad. I hate Corona19.
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I want to travel abroad for vacation.I want to travel abroad for a vacation.
Because before corona 19, I went on a trip every vacation.
>> Because before Corona 19 happened, I usually go on a trip every vacation.
But I am really sad because I can\'t travel abroad these days.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But I am really downhearted because I can\'t travel abroad these days.
Corona is really bad. I hate Corona19.
>> CORRECT!
or >> Corona is really frustrating. I hate Corona19.
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