HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
how do you set your target dates whenever you want to accomplish something?
For example, if you study to get a certificate,
first look up on the Internet for how long it takes to get it.
and set target dates.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I suggested a way to improve your sentence. The problems I noticed were mostly on the punctuation marks, capitalization and word order. Remember that the these are important in either writing or speaking. Thank you. ^^
~Elica~
how do you set your target dates whenever you want to accomplish something?
>>How do you set your targets whenever you want to accomplish something?
For example, if you study to get a certificate,
first look upon the Internet for how long it takes to get it.
and set target dates.
>>For example, if you study to get a certificate, you should first look it up on the internet about how long it would take for you to get it, then set a target date.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.