HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you think of someone that is very admirable? Why?
Successful people admire.
Being number one in any sector is not easy.
There is definitely a different part from others.
Effort or persistence, judgment, an eye for the vision, etc.
Of course, I can\'t praise every part of successful people, but I admire their successful achievements.
강사 첨삭
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Can you think of someone that is very admirable? Why?
>>CORRECT
Successful people admire.
Successful people admire.
>>I admire successful people.
Being number one in any sector is not easy.
Being number one in any sector is not easy.
>>CORRECT
There is definitely a different part from others.
There is definitely a different part from others.
>>CORRECT
Effort or persistence, judgment, an eye for the vision, etc.
Effort or persistence, judgment, an eye for the vision, etc.
>>CORRECT
Of course, I can\'t praise every part of successful people, but I admire their successful achievements.
Of course, I can\'t praise every part of successful people, but I admire their successful achievements.
>>CORRECT
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