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2021-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to travel Jeju Island because Jeju Island sea is beautiful.

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Hi Jiyu! ^^

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I want to travel Jeju Island because Jeju Island sea is beautiful.

>> I want to travel to Jeju Island because the sea there is beautiful.

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