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2021-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I want to bring tockbokki, sandwiches and pasta because these are my favorite foods. I want to share these delicious things with people. I think pod-luck lunch is good because I can taste a variety of foods. And If I eat with foreigners, I\'m going to take Seolleongtang. Seolleongtang is a soup that is a very delicious Korean food that foreigners don\'t know much about. I love~ korean foods~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you: 


I want to bring tockbokki, sandwiches and pasta because these are my favorite foods.

>> I want to bring tteokbokki, sandwiches, and pasta because these are my favorite foods.
I want to share these delicious things with people.

>> I want to share these delicious food with other people.
I think pod-luck lunch is good because I can taste a variety of foods.

>> I think pot-luck lunch is good because I can taste a variety of foods.
And If I eat with foreigners, I\'m going to take Seolleongtang. 

>> If I am going to eat with foreigners, I\'m going to bring Seolleongtang.

Seolleongtang is a soup that is a very delicious Korean food that foreigners don\'t know much about. I love~ korean foods~

>> Seolleongtang is a very delicious Korean soup that foreigners don\'t know much about. 

I love~ korean foods~

>> I love Korean food.

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