HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I want to bring tockbokki, sandwiches and pasta because these are my favorite foods.
>> I want to bring tteokbokki, sandwiches, and pasta because these are my favorite foods.
I want to share these delicious things with people.
>> I want to share these delicious food with other people.
I think pod-luck lunch is good because I can taste a variety of foods.
>> I think pot-luck lunch is good because I can taste a variety of foods.
And If I eat with foreigners, I\'m going to take Seolleongtang.
>> If I am going to eat with foreigners, I\'m going to bring Seolleongtang.
Seolleongtang is a soup that is a very delicious Korean food that foreigners don\'t know much about. I love~ korean foods~
>> Seolleongtang is a very delicious Korean soup that foreigners don\'t know much about.
I love~ korean foods~
>> I love Korean food.
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