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2021-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Unit12 homework

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Hi [이름]! ^^

I think you misread the instructions. ^^ It says that you should draw mommy while she does the things she do in the house but that\'s okay :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. My mom gets mad when I don\'t listen to her.

2.My mom gets mad when I fight with my brother.

3. My mom gets mad when I give the wrong pass while playing soccer.

4. My mom gets mad when I run into someone while walking on the streets.

5. My mom gets mad when I fight with my friend.

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