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2021-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I used to have a habit of biting my nails. I really, really hated that habit. So I tried to break that habit. So now I\'ve broken that habit.haha My fingernails were stimulated and they hurt. I\'m glad I broke that habit. I want to fix my short temper. How can I break that habit? Can I think of myself as the queen of the country? lol

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I used to have a habit of biting my nails.

>> CORRECT!
I really, really hated that habit. So I tried to break that habit.

>> I really, really hated that habit so I tried to break it.
So now I\'ve broken that habit.haha

>> So now I\'ve broken that habit.
My fingernails were stimulated and they hurt.

>> CORRECT!
I\'m glad I broke that habit.
>> CORRECT!
I want to fix my short temper.

>> CORRECT!
How can I break that habit?

>> CORRECT!
Can I think of myself as the queen of the country? lol

>> Can I think of myself as the queen of the country?

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