HOMEWORK

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I want to run a business about animals.

>> I want to run a business that is about animals.
Among them, I want to run a business about cats.

>> I want to run a business with cats.
Because my favorite animals are cats !

>> This is because my favorite animals are cats!
I think there are more people who like dogs than cats.

>> I think there are a lot of people who likes dogs more than cats.
But I prefer cats because they have cute eyes, nose, mouth, and faces.
>> CORRECT!
Let\'s all fall for the cat\'s charms!

>> CORRECT!