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I don\'t know what to give a solder but I will thank the or she very much.
Because they protects every one and our contry.
every solder is important in every nation.
but I much rather be friends than fight with other contryes
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That\'s sweet, Yu Ri! Saying \"thank you\" sincerely to the soldiers means a lot to them. That\'s good!-Faith-
I don\'t know what to give a solder but I will thank the or she very much.
>> I don\'t know what to give a soldier but I will thank him or her very much.
Because they protects every one and our contry.
Because they protects every one and our contry.
>> Because, they protect every one and our country.
every solder is important in every nation.
every solder is important in every nation.
>> Every soldier is important in every nation.
but I much rather be friends than fight with other contryes
but I much rather be friends than fight with other contryes
>> But I\'d rather be friends with foreigners than fight with them.
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