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The most memorable trip i had is traveling alone in Paris and England I saw Effel tower. It\'s the most beautiful thing i\'ve ever seen. I want to see it one more. If I can go to Europe one more, I want to speak English well and talk to them fluently.
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~ T. CamilleThe most memorable trip i had is traveling alone in Paris and England I saw Effel tower.
>> The most memorable trip I had was traveling alone in Paris and England. I saw the Eiffel tower.
It\'s the most beautiful thing i\'ve ever seen.
>> It\'s the most beautiful thing I\'ve ever seen. (Be careful with the capitalizations. :) )
I want to see it one more.
>> I want to see it one more time.
OR >> I want to see it once more.
If I can go to Europe one more, I want to speak English well and talk to them fluently.
>> If I can go to Europe once more, I want to speak English well and talk to them fluently.
OR >> If I can go to Europe one more time, I want to speak English well and talk to them fluently.
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