HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I don\'t think salads or vegetables are healthy food at all.
>> CORRECT!
I think you should eat a lot of salad and vegetables and foods with bases. But don\'t eat too much salty food.
>> I think you should eat a lot of salads and vegetables and foods with bases, but don\'t eat too much salty food.
I think the best part is the moderation. haha
>> I think the best part is moderation in eating.
But sometimes you have to eat your favorite food!
>> But sometimes, you also have to eat your favorite food!
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