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Yes, I think piano lessons are important for student\'s learning because it is musical instrument.
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Hi Jiyu! ^^
Learning to play an instrument can help your child fine-tune her ear and enhance skills needed for education and social interaction. It develops physical skills. It also cultivates social skills. It refines discipline and patience. By learning about and playing a variety of instruments, kids can discover how music plays a critical role in other cultures. It has many benefits. :) Although it should be a personal choice and not mandatory.
Yes, I think piano lessons are important for student\'s learning because it is musical instrument.
>> Yes, I think piano lessons are important for student\'s learning because it is a musical instrument.
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