Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What unfortunate event happened to you when your were on a vacation?
--> When our family went on a vacation in Sapporo, I and my husband were got influenza. So we couldn\'t enjoy vacation well.
For example, we couldn\'t enjoy skiing well, even though we visited ski resort. Also, although there were many place to eat Japanese foods including sushi and ramen, we couldn\'t eat them a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bo Im!
This is unfortunate indeed! Getting sick because of the weather, food, or stress can lead to a vacation disaster. So it is vital to be healthy and safe before, during, and after travelling. Plan, avoid sickness, and enjoy all the way!
Thank you for answering the homework question. I shall see you in a couple of hours.
-T. Donna =)
-> When our family went on a vacation in Sapporo, I and my husband were got influenza.
>> When our family went on a vacation in Sapporo, me and my husband got influenza.
For example, we couldn\'t enjoy skiing well, even though we visited ski resort.
So we couldn\'t enjoy vacation well.
>> So we couldn\'t enjoy the vacation well.
For example, we couldn\'t enjoy skiing well, even though we visited ski resort.
>> For example, we couldn\'t enjoy skiing well, even though we visited the ski resort.
Also, although there were many place to eat Japanese foods including sushi and ramen, we couldn\'t eat them a lot.
>> Also, although there were many places to eat Japanese foods including sushi and ramen, we couldn\'t eat them a lot.
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