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학생이 쓴 원문
What sports do you think you can still learn with your age?
-> As I said before, I don\'t like playing sports. But if I have a chance to learn new sports, I want to learn to play golf.
Because when I traveled to abroad, I had a chance to play golf there. But at that time, as I could not play golf I didn\'t enjoy that.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bo Im!
You definitely have to play this sports because you might need to play with the bosses of your clients in the future. I am sure that apart from enjoying the sports, you can also build a tighter business relations. It can be very beneficial to your health as well as career.
Anyway, kindly go over the sentences below and take note of the use of \"traveled abroad\" instead of \"traveled to abroad\" as this prepositional adverb can be tricky sometimes.
I will see you later again in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But if I have a chance to learn new sports, I want to learn to play golf.
>> Correct!
Because when I traveled to abroad, I had a chance to play golf there.
>> Because when I traveled abroad, I had a chance to play golf there.
But at that time, as I could not play golf I didn\'t enjoy that.
>> Correct!
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