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2021-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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When someone ask me for money, um.. I think I can’t give money anyone I don\'t know. If he or she is scared, I will go to the bathroom and run away. or My heart wants to help. But I don’t have money so I will call adults. My parents told me.^^ You should try this. haha

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


When someone ask me for money, um.. I think I can’t give money anyone I don\'t know. 

>> If someone asks me for money, I think I can’t give money to anyone I don\'t know. 

If he or she is scared, I will go to the bathroom and run away.

>> If he or she is scary, I will go to the bathroom and run away.
or My heart wants to help. But I don’t have money so I will call adults. My parents told me.^^ 

>> My heart wants to help but I don’t have money so I will call the adults, my parents told me this.

You should try this. haha

>> You should try this.

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