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2012-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

1.I got home and found that someone tried (try) to break into the house. 2. I celebrated last Friday night because I had passed (pass) my exams the day before. 3. I saw a bad accident on my way here. Two cars crashed (crash) on the crossroads. 4. I got to the cinema and a minute later the film started (start) . 5. I got to the cinema and saw that the film had started already (already/start) . I was busy with employee gettogeter. Today is Jung-Wul-Dae-Bo-Rum. This is not holyday, but Korean traditional day. We played Yut. The Yut is Korean traditional game. Four sticks which has rounded side and flat side are throwed. A token may be moved a number of flat side But if all sticks are rounded side, it can move 5. All rounded side or all flat side has a chance to throw the stick. A team of which token around a board wins. It's so difficult to explain this.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Thank you for making your homework today..:) I also want to playing that traditional game but I think it\'s quite difficult,kk.. But anyway, I made some modifications on your composition. Just read and study the following.. Talk to you later Miss. [Name]..^^ Teacher Cam 1.I got home and found that someone tried (try) to break into the house. >>correct!2. I celebrated last Friday night because I had passed (pass) my exams the day before. >>correct!3. I saw a bad accident on my way here. Two cars crashed (crash) on the crossroads. >>correct!4. I got to the cinema and a minute later the film started (start) . >>correct!5. I got to the cinema and saw that the film had started already (already/start) .>>correct!I was busy with employee gettogeter. >>I was busy with our get together.Today is Jung-Wul-Dae-Bo-Rum. >>correct!This isnot holyday, but Korean traditional day. >>This is not a Holiday but its\' a Korean traditional day.We played Yut. >>correct!The Yut is Korean traditional game. >>correct!Four sticks which has rounded side and flat side are throwed. >>Four sticks which has rounded sides and flat sides are thrown.A token may be moved a number of flat side >>A token will be moved by a number of flat sides.But if all sticks are rounded side, it can move >>But if all sticks are rounded, it\'s impossible for us to move them.All rounded side or all flat side has a chance to throw the stick. >>correct!A team of which token around a board wins.>>The team who has the token will win the game.It\'s so difficult to explain this. >>correct!

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