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2021-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Q:Kindly answer the following in essay form. What do you love most about your city and why? A:It\'s the sea right in front of you, so you can go and play anytime.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

That sounds amazing. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

It\'s the sea right in front of you, so you can go and play anytime.

>> The thing I love the most about my city is the sea in front of my apartment. I can go there anytime to play.

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