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I think the most bad habits that people can have will be the habits that is using during the night. When we sleep, sometimes someone is sleepwalking. I think it will be terrible when someone sleepwalk in our house. It can be real!! 🤔
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Hi David!
Haha! That\'s a good idea.
Thanks for doing the homework. See you tomorrow~
~ T. Elsa ^^
I think the most bad habits that people can have will be the habits that is using during the night.>> I think the worst habit anyone can have is a bad habit while sleeping.
When we sleep, sometimes someone is sleepwalking.
>> When we sleep, sometimes, someone sleepwalks.
I think it will be terrible when someone sleepwalk in our house. It can be real!
>> I think it will be terrible when someone sleepwalks in our house. It can be real!
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