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I want to go on a trip with my family after the pandemic ends.
And I want to study English abroad with my daughter.
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I want to go on a trip with my family after the pandemic ends.
And I want to study English abroad with my daughter.
>> I want to go on a trip with my family when the pandemic ends.
OR
>> I want to go on a trip with my family after the pandemic.
And I want to study English abroad with my daughter.
>> This is a good sentence!
Hi, [이름]! I really wish you could study abroad after this pandemic.
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