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2012-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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'Seolnal'is a traditinal day of Korea. The day means that it's start a new year. Actually the first day of a new year is 1,January but there is a the other the first day of a new year in Korea. We eat 'DDeunk kuk(seem to a rice soup)' and have a ceremoney for the forefathers. I know that the days about moon. That's reason why we have a two things about a first day of a new year. Wow, It's too dificult to explain about 'Seolnal'. Maybe that is a distinction of culture. I have to study the traditional day of Korea.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing about your traditional day in Korea! I really appreciate it and I learned something about Seolnal from you.^^ Here are your corrections:   \'Seolnal\'is a traditinal day of Korea. >>CORRECT [The sentence is correct but the spelling of traditional is t-r-a-d-i-t-i-o-n-a-l] The day means that it\'s start a new year.>> The day means that it\'s the start of a New Year.Actually the first day of a new year is 1,January but there is a the other the first day of a new year in Korea.>> Actually the first day of  New Year is January 1st but there is another first day of New Year in Korea.We eat \'DDeunk kuk(seem to a rice soup)\' and have a ceremoney for the forefathers.>> We eat \'DDeunk kuk (it\'s the same to a rice soup)\' and have a ceremony for the forefathers.I know that the days about moon.>> I know that the days are about the moon.That\'s reason why we have a two things about a first day of a new year.>> That\'s the reason why we have two things about the first day of  New Year.Wow, It\'s too dificult to explain about \'Seolnal\'.>> CORRECT [The sentence is correct but the spelling of difficult is d-i-f-f-i-c-u-l-t]Maybe that is a distinction of culture.>>CORRECTI have to study the traditional day of Korea. >>CORRECT  

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