Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi nika~~ this is my homework
1. play
Yesterday, with my brother play badminton
2. paper
Would please give me one paper?
3. food
This is diet in very well food
4. eat
I want eat the small intestines of cattle
5. dinner
Now time is dinner
6. family
My family is a harmonious , especially my brother is very cute :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, thank you for making your compostion. I know you could still better. I appreciate your effort. Keep it up.
T. Nica
Hi nika~~ this is my homework>>Hi Nica. This is my homework.1. playYesterday, with my brother play badminton>>Yesterday, I played badminton with my brother.2. paperWould please give me one paper?>>Would you please give me a piece of paper?3. foodThis is diet in very well food >>This food is well for having diet.4. eatI want eat the small intestines of cattle >>I want to eat the small intestines of the cattle. 5. dinnerNow time is dinner>>Now it\'s time for dinner6. familyMy family is a harmonious , especially my brother is very cute :)
>>My family is very harmonious , especially my brother is very cute :)
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