Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I recommend Ever land in Korea

>> I recommend Ever land in Korea.
I think it is the best amusement park in Korea

>> I think it is the best amusement park in Korea. 
This place is full of machines and a beautiful garden

>> This place is full of machines and a beautiful garden.
So I recommend this place

>>So I recommend this place.

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Hi [이름]!
All of your sentences are grammatically correct but I did not put \"CORRECT!\" because you did not put a period at the end of your sentences. 

Please remember to put a period at the end of your sentences. :)