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What gadget do you think has the least function nowadays?
--> There seem to be a lot of new godgets that come out these days that have a variety of functions. However, there is also one that focus on the professional function. I think the camera could be an example. It only has the function to take pictures, but it is completely focused on that of taking pictures, allowing us to get professional-like pictures.
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Hi there Bo Im!
Do you ever wonder why there is a smartphone competition among renowned brands? One is because of the camera or cameras that they offer and there is not only one, not two, but nowadays, three of them in one smart phone. With the camera having the solo function to take photos, it may take some time for it to malfunction. Well, as of our smartphones, they are convenient and take professional-like photos just as well.
Thanks for your answer. The camera sure does a function only it can compared to other gadgets.
See you in a few.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
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However, there is also one that focus on the professional function. I think the camera could be an example.
>> However, there is also one that focuses on the professional function. I think the camera could be an example.
It only has the function to take pictures, but it is completely focused on that of taking pictures, allowing us to get professional-like pictures.
>> Correct!
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