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My parents bought me a grand piano for graduation gift at my middle school graduation.
I was really happy to receive the piano that I wanted to have.
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My parents bought me a grand piano for graduation gift at my middle school graduation.
I was really happy to receive the piano that I wanted to have.
>> My parents bought me a grand piano as a graduation gift for my middle school graduation.
I was really happy to receive the piano that I wanted to have.
>> This is a good sentence!
Wow! That was grand! You got a grand piano for your graduation! I hope you still have it with you.
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