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What makes a place more attractive? The place itself or the people?
--> There seem to be a number of factors that make it an attractive place to be remembered in memory.
But in my case now, I\'m always with my family wherever I go, so I think it\'s more attractive depending on where I go.
Any place with your family is good, but I think the various place itself makes me feel more attractive.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Bo Im!
There are very attractive places with good people and culture. Of course if you travel with your family, it is a collective experience and shared better with them. it seems here on your answer that your family plus a good place are a good combination of travel. Thus, there are no better people and all places become perfect when you are with them.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts to my question and see you in a few!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But in my case now, I\'m always with my family wherever I go, so I think it\'s more attractive depending on where I go.
>> Correct!
Any place with your family is good, but I think the various place itself makes me feel more attractive.
Any place with your family is good, but I think the various place itself makes me feel more attractive.
>> Any place with your family is good, but I think the various places make me feel more attractive.
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