homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Who was your biggest hero as a child?
In my childhood, My older sister is my hero.
She is always protect me from bad companion.
She consideration for me.
And, she was taller than me of our tender years.
At present, far from it.
All the time, She means a lot to me.
강사 첨삭
Excellent homework! I hope you and your sister will always have a good relationship.Have a nice day!Teacher Faye
Here are come sorrections for you:Who was your biggest hero as a child?>>CorrectIn my childhood, My older sister is my hero.>>In my childhood, my older sister was my hero.She is always protect me from bad companion.>>She always protected me from bad people.She consideration for me.>>She has a good consideration for me.And, she was taller than me of our tender years.>>And, she was taller than me during our tender years.At present, far from it. >>At present, I am taller than her.All the time, She means a lot to me. >>Correct
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