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2021-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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What was the biggest amount you lend someone? Where you able to get your money back? --> In fact, I have rarely lent money to anyone other than my family. Lending $1,000 to a friend once is the only one experience of lending money to someone. When I happened to visit her house, I heard a call she was trying to borrow about $1000 from a loan company. I said I\'d lend her that money instead because she had to pay back a very high interest if she borrowed it there. She returned me about six months later with some money and her son\'s gold necklace.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Bo Im!

You are a very merciful friend. With a premise that your friend is also a very good person, you have lent her. Six months is quite a long while however, you trusted that she will return that amount. If I were you, I would get worried about my money. ^^

Anyway, thanks for sharing this information. I also lend money only to trusted people. At times, I just give them some money instead of lending them as a form of help. 

I shall see you in class in a few more minutes. Thank you for doing your homework!

-T. Donna =)

In fact, I have rarely lent money to anyone other than my family.
>> Correct!

Lending $1,000 to a friend once is the only one experience of lending money to someone.
>> Correct!

When I happened to visit her house, I heard a call she was trying to borrow about $1000 from a loan company.
>> When I happened to visit her house, I heard a call that she was trying to borrow about $1000 from a loan company.

I said I\'d lend her that money instead because she had to pay back a very high interest if she borrowed it there.
>> Correct!

She returned me about six months later with some money and her son\'s gold necklace.
>> She returned it to me about six months later with some money and her son\'s gold necklace.

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