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2021-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I prefer to eat some fried or some kinds of meet like chicken, beef and pork because i used to eating meat and i have some request, actually i know that improving my speaking level is really need but i feel my reading skill is going terrible and by the time is gone i forget almost vocabulary so i think studying more difficult one can be better choice One reason for the rising interest in protecting whales is the opportunity many people have had to observe them firsthand. Indeed, whale watching has become an important tourist enterprise in coastal areas. Stellwagen Bank, within easy reach of boats from Boston, Massachusetts, has become the center of the U.S. whale-watching industry estimated to be worth more than $78 million annually. Operating from spring through fall, scores of boats venture offshore daily to watch the whales that congregate over the ban i think similar to this level is better if there is no appropriate book, we can choose the times article or essay

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I understand what you want to achieve at this point in time of your English training. I will then choose articles from the Time Magazine and send it to you in advance to read and digest. After that, I will be asking pertinent questions about the article.

Great choice of material. I am glad you have suggested this. Thanks for telling me this. I shall see you then on Wednesday for a different level of English studies.

-T. Donna =) 

I prefer to eat some fried or some kinds of meet like chicken, beef and pork because i used to eating meat
and i have some request, actually i know that improving my speaking level is really need but i feel my reading skill is going terrible and by the time is gone i forget almost vocabulary so i think studying more difficult one can be better choice
>> I prefer to eat some fried or some kinds of meet like chicken, beef, and pork because I am used to eating meat
and I have some request. Actually I know that improving my speaking level is really needed but I feel that my reading skill is going terrible and by the time, I forget almost many vocabulary. So I think studying more difficult ones can be a better choice.


One reason for the rising interest in protecting whales is
the opportunity many people have had to observe them firsthand.
Indeed, whale watching has become an important tourist enterprise
in coastal areas. Stellwagen Bank, within easy reach of boats from
Boston, Massachusetts, has become the center of the U.S.
whale-watching industry estimated to be worth more than $78
million annually. Operating from spring through fall, scores of
boats venture offshore daily to watch the whales that congregate
over the ban.
>> Correct!

i think similar to this level is better if there is no appropriate book, we can choose the times article or essay.
>> I think similar to this level is better if there is no appropriate book, we can choose the Time article or essay.

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