homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Please remind me to call Mr.Jones tomorrow moring.
verb obj infinitive
2.Please tell him not to smoke here - it's not allowed.
verb object infinitive
3.Marta dinn't feel too good
but we persuaded her to come to the party.
verb obj inf~
4.Nobody wanted to go to the conference
but our boss forced us to go to it.
verb Ob inf~
5.I asked her not to call so late in the evening. I go to bed early.
verb obj inf~
6. We showed them how to use the new equipment.
verb object inf~
I was angry yesterday.
My company held get together.
We played Yut on my company.
A member of our team interrupted the game continuosly.
He shouted loudly, pussed the player, faked the Yut board.
I wanted to say "Go fly a kite".
I was shamed of him.
That afternoon, I recieved my ski wear that ordered on the internet last Saturday.
As soon as put it on, my anger began to melt. kk
강사 첨삭
Wow miss Sunny, job well done on your composition today!:)
I also noticed you used our idiom for the day, go fly a kite..that\'s very impressive!Keep up the good work my dear..
By the way, I made some modifications on some of your sentences..
Just try to study and analyze the following..
But I commend you for a job well done Miss. [Name]..^^
Talk to you again later my dear..
Teacher Cam^^
1.Please remind me to call Mr.Jones tomorrow moring.verb obj infinitive>>correct2.Please tell him not to smoke here - it\'s not allowed.verb object infinitive>>correct3.Marta dinn\'t feel too good but we persuaded her to come to the party.verb obj inf~>>correct4.Nobody wanted to go to the conference but our boss forced us to go to it.verb Ob inf~>>correct5.I asked her not to call so late in the evening. I go to bed early.verb obj inf~>>correct6. We showed them how to use the new equipment.verb object inf~>>correctI was angry yesterday.
>>correctMy company held get together.
>>My company had a get together.We played Yut on my company.
>>correctA member of our team interrupted the game continuosly.
>>correctHe shouted loudly, pussed the player, faked the Yut board.
>>correctI wanted to say \"Go fly a kite\".
>>correctI was shamed of him.
>>correctThat afternoon, I recieved my ski wear that ordered on the internet last Saturday.
>>That afternoon, I recieved my ski wear that I ordered on the internet last Saturday.As soon as put it on, my anger began to melt. kk
>>As soon as I wore it, my anger began to subside.
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