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What can transform your business to a higher level?
--> I think it is important to upgrade my English skills in order to raise my business to a higher level.
Since foreign companies are leading the fragrance industry, smooth communication with foreign companies is helpful for more information and trend acquisition.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bo Im!
Agreed! If your skills are top class, then you are on top of the industry. Language is a very powerful tool. Use it effectively and wisely.
Thank you for this straightforward and very meaningful content, not to mention the well-thought of grammar. Congratulations!
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Since foreign companies are leading the fragrance industry, smooth communication with foreign companies is helpful for more information and trend acquisition.
>> Correct!
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