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2021-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Q:Please answer this question in essay format. If you could go on a trip with your family, where would you be and why? A:I want to go to Seoul not Jeju Island and meet my relatives, grandmother, and grandfather.

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Hi [이름] ! ^^

Being with your family really is a nice thing to do. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I want to go to Seoul not Jeju Island and meet my relatives, grandmother, and grandfather.

>> I want to go to Seoul and meet my relatives like my grandmother, and grandfather.

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